Jack Anderson's Best Cousin's House
by Amelia Burgess
The End.
by Amelia Burgess
Once upon a time there was a baby butterfly. She was going over to her friend Jack Anderson's cousin's house. She saw her friend's house was on fire, so she jumped on top of the roof and she got some water from the water fountain and she got where the fire was and there was a hole. Then she didn't know what to do, so lots of friends came over and they had a birthday party.
The End.
We must work on denoument and resolution...
2 comments:
I LOVE it! There's plenty of time for Freitag's pyramid. :)
that makes me smile :-)
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